I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Well done Shavarna- this is a well thought out rule book for our library! Perhaps we could share with our new students or Mrs Manton. Next time, you could add some of your awesome google draw pictures for viewers showing them how to put the books back correctly :)
Hey shavarna, I like your title because it is interesting. You are right you should take your shoes off and maybe next time write more. Maybe make a picture of the people. I all so hope you get more comments and they aren’t like cool or nice by them self. I will see your next blog an all so maybe it will be longer than this one. Did you have help??? From chloe a.k.a your best friend.
Good Job! This post is really well planned and it must of taken you a very long time. Well done on being and enthusiastic learner and an open minded explorer. You're being a HERO. This deserves to be up on the library door. What is your favourite part of the library? And why?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Well done Shavarna- this is a well thought out rule book for our library! Perhaps we could share with our new students or Mrs Manton.
ReplyDeleteNext time, you could add some of your awesome google draw pictures for viewers showing them how to put the books back correctly :)
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DeleteHey shavarna,
ReplyDeleteI like your title because it is interesting. You are right you should take your shoes off and maybe next time write more. Maybe make a picture of the people. I all so hope you get more comments and they aren’t like cool or nice by them self. I will see your next blog an all so maybe it will be longer than this one. Did you have help??? From chloe a.k.a your best friend.
thankyou
DeleteHi Shavarna!
ReplyDeleteGood Job! This post is really well planned and it must of taken you a very long time. Well done on being and enthusiastic learner and an open minded explorer. You're being a HERO. This deserves to be up on the library door. What is your favourite part of the library? And why?
Bella,
Rimu Class,
Yaldhurst Model School
thank-you so much
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