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Thursday, 28 September 2017

mega city


Once upon a time in mega city there was a boy that wanted a motorbike. He had a brown guitar that he played to get money.  He had a big gar and he would  put his money in.  then soon he got all the money up to the top of the gar. Then he buyed the motorbike. I think he buyed a house is well. And at the     end he gave his dog some dog biscuits and they lived happily after.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Shavarna,
    What was your favorite thing about writing your blog mine was when he bought a motorbike and a house
    maybe next time you could focus on your spelling
    Thanks Billie.

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