Once upon a time in mega city there was a boy that wanted a motorbike. He had a brown guitar that he played to get money. He had a big gar and he would put his money in. then soon he got all the money up to the top of the gar. Then he buyed the motorbike. I think he buyed a house is well. And at the end he gave his dog some dog biscuits and they lived happily after.
I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 28 September 2017
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Shavarna,
ReplyDeleteWhat was your favorite thing about writing your blog mine was when he bought a motorbike and a house
maybe next time you could focus on your spelling
Thanks Billie.